Pantun Ke Dua
February 28, 2009Hujan turun dengan hebat lebat,
Kucing sembunyi di bawah peti;
Benda yang terbaik Cinta setia tak perlu dilihat,
Ia dirasa dengan hati.
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Hujan turun dengan hebat lebat,
Kucing sembunyi di bawah peti;
Benda yang terbaik Cinta setia tak perlu dilihat,
Ia dirasa dengan hati.
hebat can be lebat = heavy
it may be hari x h. lebat to accentuate the Malayness; x may be a name of a day
hari x. may also be changed to a period in a day like morning, afternoon or evening
2nd line ok
3rd line too vague especially benda baik
better mention it i.e. persahabatan or jasa baik
tidak mudah dicari = not easy to find
then i have disrupted you lebat
however it is worth setting the meaning first and fill in the symbolics
why mereka when benda is singular
hence jasa baik can be capture with Ia or rephrase into orang memberi kita merasa (orang here refers to the good sammaritans who offer the merits)