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Pantun Ke Tiga

February 28, 2009

Baju yang bercetai-cetai Apabila muzik viola mulai,

Tertinggal di luar rumah Gadis-gadis suka menari;

Kawan karib mesti dihargai,

Sebab Mereka tidak dapat dengan mudah mudah dicari.

friends

Taken from: www.canhope.com.sg/forum/viewtopic.php?f=13&t=70

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One comment

  1. why keep tattered clothes at home? :P

    fourth line dapat perhaps may be datang

    as in good things don’t come easy

    Now i know why i used friendship in the previous comment, the influence of this present read.

    Sebab now may be mereka, likewise your thoughts were stradding across two pantuns

    the symbolics need to be changed as pakaian is too unMalay because it is two complicated combination

    unpack to kain or baju, or sarung or celana (old term of troussers)

    tinggal di rumah could be more refine simpan di peti or lipat di katil

    cikgu



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